Thursday, May 14, 2020

Waiting Room Comments

Rating: 5.0

I got tangled
in time
I'm lost
in the chaos
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Anna Banasiak
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Daniel Brick 15 June 2020

" I'm confused by the turn of things." That's the theme of this poem. But you've paused to give some thought to your situation. Time is a mean trickster: sometimes to goes too fast, sometimes too slow. You fear the steady approach of death, but the waiting room is a tedious place to be. A poem like those can liberate you: you realize your mind is active, it still grasps the nature of life. Your mind conquers reality. At least, there is that possibility.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 May 2020

A well composed poem. Simply exceptional........10++👌

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 May 2020

Such a nice poem, Anna Banasiak. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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