Thursday, November 1, 2018

Waiting Room Comments

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Watching all the faces
As people come and go
I can say for sure
None of them do I know
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Ray Hansell
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 01 November 2018

Waiting room where we see gloom, silent prayer and hope.Fantastic write.

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Practicing Poetess 01 November 2018

Ray, on the 4th line of the 3rd stanza, there's a little typo that needs editing- - it should read 'But there', not but the- - fingers were probably flying and you skipped a couple of letters there- - but Otherwise, it's PERFECT!

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Ray Hansell

Ray Hansell

New Jersey
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New Jersey
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