Monday, October 24, 2011

Waiting On You Comments

Rating: 5.0

When you get this message, don't even call
I'll be at the lake, admiring the colors of Fall
Sitting on an old hollowed out log
Maybe throwing a stick for my old dog
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james d nall,jr
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Romeo Della Valle 28 October 2011

Excellent and heart touching too! I love this well penned and rich in great imagery and rhymes! 10+++ Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Vipins Puthooran 24 October 2011

Waiting with a smile like a jewelry I'll wear! That was a wonderful line..I like this poem very much.. Excellent write!

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james d nall,jr

james d nall,jr

blackshear, georgia
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