Friday, September 26, 2008

Waiting On The Other Side Of The Door Comments

Rating: 4.7

500 Miles,500 Miles,
I have come 500 Miles!
My taxi is lost, my luggage is gone,
But I am on my way! !
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Scarlett Treat
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Ernestine Northover 26 September 2008

The building of tension as the moment arrives. Especially after such a long journey. I hope the answer is in the positive. Nice write. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Sid John Gardner. 26 September 2008

Anyone covering that distance, to be with that person, must be seriously in love with her.The yearning and the realisation that SHE is on the other side of the door will render him breathless with the anticipation of simply being together again. Nice write Scarlett and thanks for the dedication. xx

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Joseph Poewhit 26 September 2008

Poem holds much antisipation

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