Waiting On The Corner Comments

hey you, Divine! i don't get the part about closing eyes to see. hmmm? again, i missed something? ? ? maybe if i close my eyes i'll see it. i really don't remember meeting you on that corner, after waiting so long for you. and it WAS a nice dress i was wearing, wasn't it? i wish other men (and women too) didn't stare so much. haven't people around here seen a man before, wearing a dress? ? bri :)

A lovely, heartfelt poem Lora. The last verse is just beautiful.

Cute, happy poem with deep enigma. Good job. Read mine - Everybody Has Had Somebody - Adeline

Excellent poem Lora, very well rhymed.

Lora is a happy girl, happy girl, happy girl, Lora is a happy girl, that's what we like to see!

Lovely lines to describe your happiness.

Your writing reminds me of Ella Wheeler Wilcox, my favourite poet.

Beautiful. It flows so well.This is a poem to be read again and again.

I close my eyes to see your face Amazing in its depth in characterizing true love!