Monday, July 13, 2009

Waiting In Vain Comments

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It seems like a thousand years
To see my life to bear a pear
It's so hard to comprehend
Trying hard not to depend
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Mary Joy Lumanog
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Broken Heart 18 July 2009

waoo! ! nice poem! ! loved it 10++ frm me: D

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Kerry O'Connor 18 July 2009

You have chosen a universal theme, which many readers will recognize. I like the lines: 'To promise is a word to say / But waiting is hard to make it stay.'

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Mary Joy Lumanog

Mary Joy Lumanog

Bacolod City, Philippines
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