I'm waiting for you to return
Into my arms at century's turn
It irks me much to see you talk
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you have a touch of literary language fixing oxymorons and other figures of speech... enjoyed this one too
Sad to think that someone you love left you... or anyone of us! And few still awaits for that someone to return, it maybe painful but soothing too somehow. High marks.
ahaa...now this is just like the saurabh i knew... its very good.....n touching..thumbs up :)