Friday, June 28, 2013

Waiting For You! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Waiting at the sea shore
For my love..
Cool breeze flowing all over
The beautiful sun going beyond
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2018

It seems that waves are telling me each time To wash away everything from memories.. And to move a head in life.......touching expression. A beautiful philosophical poem so nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.10

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Neela Nath Das 08 September 2013

It sounds like Herbert Spencer's sonnet.Fabulous!

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Rubab Atwal 10 July 2013

beautiful poetry.loved it

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Ramesh Rai 02 July 2013

Each day I write on seashore Am waiting for you! Each time waves comes running And washing it away. beautiful write. keep going on. ++++10

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

Kerala Palakkad
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