Monday, August 24, 2009

Waiting For You............... Comments

Rating: 4.5

You are next door
I could even knock
but when I stand up
my throbs mock
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lalitha iyer
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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 24 August 2009

A very beautiful poem. The love and longing are expressed in a gentle and subdued way with feminine touch. Enjoyed much.

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Catrina Heart 24 August 2009

lovely yet poignant...............thanks! ! ! ! ! !

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Sandra Martyres 24 August 2009

A very poignant piece Lalitha...you describe the waiting very well...

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Raj Arumugam 24 August 2009

a lovely poem, Lalitha - about the love that dares not speak...sad and lovely

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