Waiting For You Comments

a lovely warm poem..beautiful writing ’m lying on old The fallen leaves My romantic lap Under the doped full-moon I’m waiting for you. Slumber clutched me Dreaming you’re in The kingdom of Million moon’s light Pale words are; But Myriad smile of you I’m waiting for you.

LOVE ROMANCE INFATUATION with all elements e.g.: Love Wine, Incense Candle, Ambience, Flowers, Full Moon, Smile [8]. What else a fiancée expect for? Lastly with a but why sudden death of such a poem? May be poetic provision, passion, desperation? Poets and or readers reaction please. Tennnnnnnn WR

Getting is end of journey of JOY! Being in waiting for getting is JOY! ! Very emotive! Ten++ PO PO

You make me feel close to the heaven while i read your poems... so romantic. Dimpllii. Colombia

Really nice poem that touche my feelings in reading it

once again an engrossing one, prof!

Very romantic piece, love it,10+++