I sat here waiting for you
The clock just ticked
Second by second
Minute by minute
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Vivid imagery and a lot of passion. I hope, though, it's just a poem and that the act of cutting is just symbolic. Good to feel the pain thoroughly and honestly and then forget about it.
well penned I'll agree with the previous comment very good imagery and the whole thing flows very well a nice piece of work keep up the good work