Monday, December 29, 2008

Waiting For You Comments

Rating: 4.5

I sat here waiting for you
The clock just ticked
Second by second
Minute by minute
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dillon Lowery
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Man On Fire 30 December 2008

well penned I'll agree with the previous comment very good imagery and the whole thing flows very well a nice piece of work keep up the good work

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Sonny Rainshine 29 December 2008

Vivid imagery and a lot of passion. I hope, though, it's just a poem and that the act of cutting is just symbolic. Good to feel the pain thoroughly and honestly and then forget about it.

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