Tuesday, June 3, 2008

Waiting For You.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

He was there, lying on his old bed
full of blood..
I took his hand,
his body was cold
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Lilith Gblack
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(: God's Wild Child :) 09 June 2008

i like it. it expresses emotion very well. good job, keep it up.

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Marvin Brato 03 June 2008

A loved departed one always keep us alive with good memories! A 10.

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