Waiting For The Tide Comments
The waters in the marina today
Were gin clear, clear enough to
See the graves of discarded beer
Cans and empty bottles waiting
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Great poem. Its like i was there with you. Even better, like i was Jack the beggar begging for more poems from you. Inspired.
An excellent poem! I appreciate the keen observation of the poet that has gone into the making of this wonderful poem. Liked the fourth stanza most. Top score!
What I love about your poetry is the visualisation of the surroundings. Every minute detail is so beautifully captured into words. Very nice poem.
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8/5/2025 5:44:46 AM # 1.0.0
You're a beautiful man Dave, And a good poet