Saturday, July 23, 2016

Waiting For The Rains Comments

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Heavy clouds have darkened the sky,
Rain sweetheart, otherwise may fly,
But I don't see anything dynamic,
Air is humid and the winds static,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Geetha Jayakumar 06 August 2016

Beautiful poem on rain drops flowing gently yet beautifully. Loved reading it.

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Valsa George 29 July 2016

Your poem on the rain is as beautiful as the rainbow that appears as a band of colors across the clear sky after a drizzle! !

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Muhammad Ali 24 July 2016

Very beautiful poem it is. smooth as gentle rain.

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Loke Kok Yee 24 July 2016

Even rain in your hands become a delight thank you sir

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M Asim Nehal 23 July 2016

One of the best poem on the rain, The description you gave will never fain After reading your poem I got delighted I am sure others will be excited You are the true master of great imageries How can someone match your masteries

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