They say we are going home,
but home is where we take our last breath.
home is where my heart belongs,
But before I go, I will keep waiting! !
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The metaphored poem is true unique. I have never read like this. So many hidden messages inside. This poem has a powerful start in these two lines: I cite them here: They say we are going home, but home is where we take our last breath.. My heart leaps up, I am tremendously shocked, after having realized that YOUR HOME IS YOUR GRAVE. I wish to say, may you keep wandering the longest time. Touching story.
IF I MAY SAY, this is a poem from a poet who still lives in a country full of dictator's rules. This heart touching poem is the result of a person's thought who may still not write what his heart is urging. This poem has not only a double meaning but it can be interpreted into more meanings. CONGRATULATIONS as the Member Poem Of The Day.10
I had been living in Indonesia. Last 19th April was the election for a new president, I do hope that this present president would be chosen again by the Indonesians, because from the first president till 2014, all the previous ones were all corrupt. This present president is the first true honest one. Imagine so long independent and just now this president is building up whole Indonesia. And Indonesia is a very big country, at least 3000 islands or are has it 30.000?
I sadly wish to see the sad words of your letters, and perhaps a surprise, smile from an unlikely source...... so straight an lucid the words. Intense and touchy. Nice a work to penetrate human heart. Thanks a lot.
A marvelous poem of the day, Kareem. Congrats for being chosen....10+++++++++
You cannot read, and me i cannot write, So people dictate how we live our lives, Don't hear about me, from people, Ask me about me from me if ever we meet again.... //.... This is an emotional craving for one's own self, space or an identity in an alien land. Thanks & Congrats. Great Poem.
Thank for sharing Very great poem of the day
A beautiful and sad poem hoping for realization of a hope. Congrats for POD.
Oh life! Cover your blushes; Oh love! ! Cover your blushes Hope is ahead. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
" Until then, may the skies of foreign land Cover your blushes" . Heartiest congrats on poem of the Day.
for the letter you sent, I waited everyday at the door step, waiting for your gentle footstep, those steps of truth//// beautiful waiting which touches the loving heart fairly O the yellow envelop coming hand by hand under the lamp-post the Postman seeking and reading the address you are standing under the moon-lit standing, breathing, crossing longest wink a dawn crow is cawing but the yellow envelop comes with tears............
Deep passionate feeling nicely brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt.