Waiting For The End...! Comments

Very touching lines dear... That's true dear that we are the enemy of ourselves but be strong because we can be the angels too.... A great philosophy you have shared through your poetry.... Very matured thoughts.......the people are made to give you pain... I want to read this line again and again... Thanks for sharing.. God bless you

cont.) i could say a lot more, but i want to take the time to read one more of your poems today. i assume English is not your 1st language, and maybe it is your 3rd or 4th. i'm sure your English and, hopefully, your outlook on life will improve. or maybe it is NOT YOUR outlook but that of some other person(s) , perhaps fictional. good luck. bri :) p.s. i disagree with some statements in the poem and Poet's Notes.

(cont.) i could say a lot more, but i want to take the time to read one more of your poems today. i assume English is not your 1st language, and maybe it is your 3rd or 4th. i'm sure your English and, hopefully, your outlook on life will improve. or maybe it is NOT YOUR outlook but that of some other person(s) , perhaps fictional. good luck. bri :) p.s. i disagree with some statements in the poem and Poet's Notes.

Somber and sombre are different spellings of the same word, meaning (1) dark and gloomy, or (2) melancholy. Somber is preferred in American English, while sombre is preferred in all the other main varieties of English. but sombre is an adjective, not a noun, so unless you are about to say something about flies (insects) which are sad, you should use a noun such as sadness, not sombre. (cont.)

Where there is ugliness I challenge you to see the beauty, when people are broken I challenge you to help mend them, where there is hate there is usually love, where there is a broken heart there is somebody who will fix it! A great write Naila!

read carefully your notes on this poem.. it is lovely...... you are your own enemy if we fall into despair or drugs. it does not solve anything in life....... face life. remain conneted with the Almighty God and work hard with a definite aim in life to achieve. you are sure to achieve., take my words for it...... God bless you dear poetess. tony

I love this poem Naila. You seem wise beyond your years. Please continue pouring out your heart and thoughts with words, you do it so well.

you have yet not read my answer to ur qs please do

...You may not know I am a true poet I know the veins of poets just by reading their poetry You have the nerve and verve keep going the sprint is a great sign of victory not every one can compose poetry educate your self gain knowledge and out of experience shall come WISDOM i have seen poets many poets have seldom i am not at the start of life the sunset approaches and now s my horizon soon I will set never mind life has a sunrise and finally it must set for all without exception

..You may not know I am a true poet I know the veins of poets just by reading their poetry You have the nerve and verve keep going the sprint is a great sign of victory not every one can compose poetry educate your self gain knowledge and out of experience shall come WISDOM i have seen poets many poets have seldom i am not at the start of life the sunset approaches and now s my horizon soon I will set never mind life has a sunrise and finally it must set for all without exception

Great description of the ugliness of the world and how it can affect young people 's thoughts.Good one!

YOU are too young to be thinking of an end so early you are just at the first step of the poets ladder and you have a very very long way to go which you will ur just 15 teen not even the last of the teens keep a positive not you alone will win just THINK how many read you daiy Thank all in return read theirs also and see how with flying colours you come out with GLEE Keep composing YOUNG NAILA PARTICIPATION S POETRY

Nice poem, specially the beginning, thanks for sharing.

Naila, such a well penned poem👍👍👍

So young and you already know the truth, that life is sad, nothing does change if you have not good intentions. But tis better to be Robin Hood, help others, write poetry and hope that it will do some. good. Your poem is idealistic, and painful, but well written, your message comes thru and that's what counts.