Sunday, January 18, 2015

Waiting For Tears Comments

Rating: 4.6

My pain is yet to be melted,
At the moment it's confined,
In a heart that is still hopeful.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rain ... 20 January 2015

From the title to the last line of this poem I enjoyed it. -Rain

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Rain ... 20 January 2015

From the title to the last line of this poem I enjoyed it. -Rain

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Bisma Mirza 20 January 2015

wow Wow..! ! ! ! once again Beautiful poem..... Superb! ! ! 10 on 10

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Rajesh Thankappan 19 January 2015

Let us all hope that the pain of heart melts away and is replaced with joy and happiness. A soulful write.

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Valsa George 19 January 2015

You are greatly grieved by the horror and violence all around and wish to give your grief laden heart a cathartic release through shedding tears of blood! Very powerful write!

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