Waiting For Sorrow`s Reply Comments

Dear Rajeshwari, You have a natural knack for writing.To improve, you are to read more. However, at your age what you are writing is good, You got a tendency for descriptive poems. Why not see sorrow as a testing module of God by which He verifies our tenacity, honesty, withstand suffering and stick to all the good qualities.May be your poem re-written by you will be a gem.I read all your poems today. Some of them are really good keep on writing. Grandpa still offers you 10

You have to go further in writing poems. well written needs polish. Read many books of poets like robert frost, keats et. al. you certainly have the poetic sense and mind of presentation. Have a nice day and blessings from god to elevate in the future.

well sorrow is the greatest fire in which you mettle is tested and you comout as pure gold.....lovely write indeed

well sorrow is the greatest fire in which you mettle is tested and you comout as pure gold.....lovely write indeed