Friday, March 25, 2005

Waiting For Rain Comments

Rating: 2.9

I love the rain,
The way it gracefully falls from the leaves,
To plop soundlessly on an unforgiving ground,
Soaking up the rain until it fades away.
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Candice Renae Williams
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Pranab K Chakraborty 15 August 2015

Sorrow, pain, and for a moment It gives you the belief of innocence again... Excellent writing. Rain within the human heart... poet extends the conventional conception poetically. Thanks.

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Kim Barney 15 August 2015

Did you mean in line ten the FALLING of the rain instead of the FOLLOWING of the rain?

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 August 2015

Nice work with the muse of the rain being part of nature.

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Anil Kumar Panda 15 August 2015

Beautifully written. Loved the flow.

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Leslie Philibert 15 August 2015

Good poem, but use there instead of their in L6

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 15 August 2015

Unabated subtle lining of an eventful natural occurrence. Excellently crafted.

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Ramesh T A 15 August 2015

The importance and its recycling effects are wonderfully highlighted by the poet in this simple poem!

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Alex Ashley 03 March 2008

i like it, to the poiny but makes me feel good insie. im a sucker for rain..

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Candice Williams 30 March 2005

no comment. I was being optimistic. I know I'll stop..^_^

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Candice Renae Williams

Candice Renae Williams

Martin, Kentucky
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