Sunday, November 11, 2012

Waiting For My Turn Comments

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A memory of your life, A memory of your death
Will not be forgotten, You taking your last breath
The breath for life that failed today
Your life... Now taken away
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Lyn Paul
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Khairul Ahsan 10 December 2020

Every parting can turn out to be the last parting, no one knows! When a loved one departs, the healing takes longer time. Yet, it heals at some point in time. 'As we mourn each day the memories heal Accepting what, what is now real' - loved these lines.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2019

It is now memories that help me to remain strong Though not really knowing what went wrong..........here is the essence of the poem. A brilliant poem is so astutely delineated. Thanks for sharing.

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Bri Edwards 28 October 2016

Ms. Pppaul, Pperhapps your “p” key got stuck? **** ;) **** “But mappped out when born” “Accepting what, what is now real”..............this I enjoyed: the repeat of “what” ===================================================== “You must never give up on life. As it is the death that makes us stronger” Lynn, I am an odd bird in some ways, as many PH members, I’m sure, suspect. “odd” is not meant to imply “bad” but, instead, “different (perhaps) from the ‘norm’ ” I feel there is sometimes THE RIGHT TIME to “give up on life”! and I have trouble understanding how “death ….makes us stronger”. An interesting and thought-provoking poem. Thanks, especially if it is about YOUR LIFE. Bri :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 April 2016

As we mourn each day! Thanks for sharing.

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Brian Skyers 09 December 2012

very nice, quiet explanation.

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Owain Glyn 05 December 2012

Thoughtful and effective

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Valsa George 04 December 2012

All partings in life are sad, especially an eternal parting from dear ones! Yet there is the hope of getting reunited as everyone has to take up that final journey! A touching poem! !

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