Friday, October 10, 2008

Waiting For My Love Comments

Rating: 4.0

The land falls away below me,
The waves crash on the rock.
I see the ships below me,
Waiting in the dock.
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Stephanie Dower
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Jim Hogg 19 April 2009

A song of longing with a strong opening that gives it dramatic power. jim

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Rachel Blank 06 March 2009

Nice symbolism throughout the poem...beautifullll

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Filip Sheehan 11 November 2008

perfect! Keep writing, steph.... :)

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Ency Bearis 11 October 2008

great verses, nicely written and to read... Ency Bearis

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Tom Balch 10 October 2008

nice work Stephanie, keep the pen going Tom

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 10 October 2008

Amazing. Thanks for sharing.10.

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