Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Waiting... For My Dream Girl Comments

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Who is my Dream Girl?
Who is my Dream Girl?

Who is made just for me,
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Akash Agrawal
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Catrina Heart 25 September 2009

Now let Fate, Luck and Time play the game of Love For they will someday make me meet my Lady Dove, And for whom I can wait for Time Eternal She is my Dream Girl...She is my Dream Girl. -------- lovely and touching poem, well expressed thoughts.............Thanks! ! !

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Bele Lele 12 July 2009

Good poem.I like the last stanza

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Milaka G. 03 July 2009

Forget what the other person said. I love it. I think it is very sweet. And dont worry, your dream girl will find you.

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Kalpana Agarwal 26 June 2009

soooooooooo now we have a picture of ur betterhalf...................right...... anyways t poem was good, but I luved t last para.............which was very well composed..... gud jobb

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