Wednesday, April 24, 2013

Waiting For My Beloved Comments

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I think only of my beloved
I dream only of my beloved
I live only for my beloved
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Jazib Kamalvi 06 December 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Laxmi... You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Vipins Puthooran 24 April 2013

Welcome you First to a world of love, dreams, hopes and pains! ! ! ! Waiting for the Beloved is like we live in a dream! ! ! ! Beautiful poem! ! !

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Chandra Thiagarajan 24 April 2013

Laxmi, I think this is the first poem you're posting on PH- - Firstly, let me welcome you to this great family! This poem which shows your intense Love for your Beloved waiting for him day in and day out is very inspiring! If it's just a poetic musing then it's O.K. In case it is a true wait I feel greatly touched and pray for your dreams to turn true! As a poem it is too lovely and touching!

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