Waiting For Her Comments

vvvvvvvvvvvvvv beautiful poem....keep writing...

that's what our feeling to whom we love the most. very well done! keep writing!

i love ur poem and all but there is one hinch that does not matter so much.''stalker''''the stalker''any way i loved the romantic atmosphere of this poem.it has really touched my heart.

i see a story mixed with the dark feelings with the whitened hope. i see contrast that must last for going fast and not for the past............so cool

I FEEL A DULL MYSTERIOUS ATMOSPHERE AS U WAITING NOT FOR UR LOVER BUT SOMETHING ELSE IT THE WAY OF WRITING KEEP WORKING WE NEED A DIFFERENT THEMES ALSO

Yasser, be sure she will come to you coz one day she will realize how much you have care for her.......very fantastic job...10 Hataw

good write...good imagination behind...the ever waiting black lover...good piece 10

So beautiful and I'm sure she's gonna come to u great poem

Extreamly beautiful.....Well done

this a wonderful poems this a great stanza for me