Waiting For Adam Comments

Quote some lovely words on every stroke As you sink deeper into the ocean of love Come let's create heaven in one night For love and weather permits it so to be //// beautiful poem penned; congrats for being selected this poem as POD

Simply artistic and poetic. Congrats on your featured piece....10++

Your poem reverberates loudly the love you've penned for your woman. Congratulations on POD and thanks for posting. : -)

Yes, I agree with the poet Sylvia Frances Chan... a mixture of both... like a down and out commercial movie catering to art lovers as well. but undoubtedly with flashes of poetic beauty...and in the process a little too long.

The woman awaiting her man to come home, this poem seems to become soft poetic p.o.r.n.o. IF I may say, but in the end it turned out to be poetic verses again. Congrats for the member poem of the day, poet King. A 10.

Bed of love and act! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Stylishly composed. Simply beautiful. Got a 10. Please kindly check my poems HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH and leave your comments.