Waiting For A Sail... Comments

dear Sir, this one is a nice poem. I liked its imagination. Thanks!

Brilliant write on how vulnerable we all are to this world of constant uncertainty and falling on hard times with false friends can so easily happen, but this black and white world is also full of vibrant colours, to rejoice and cherish like our family and good friends to heal our weary souls!

Poetry itself is a media with expression directly emitting rays from the soul...a real truth, a bitter truth ...tent of army of pathos and woes...all images are set against the background of all what we are facing in the life!

A fine pearl of ahem Dinesh - many truths here, and all so very well expressed.

It is a tough world around us. The tent we live in is unprotected. There is storm outside. We must face the world. Every one of us must try to make it livable. We cannot say it is so and accept it. Beautiful poem bringing the reality out. Thank you.

In this season of turbulence, by fighting against all odds, let us try to hoist the flags of victory, instead of allowing to be washed away into the sea to be metamorphosed into pearls after many many years! Think of immediate solutions! Come out of this melancholy and smile, Dinesh! !

Though life situations and circumstances are often beyond our control yet we should strive to steer clear as when we are caught in a traffic jam! The last line of the poem is a real gem (or a pearl!) and it can be interpreted in many ways. A beautiful poem which explores life in its entirety.