tired and hungry the beast still hunts me
he stalks in the shadows as life grows shallow
waiting for the days to get shorter so he can begin his slaughter
with hatred in his eye but his job on his mind
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'you see i feel like the last word in a sentence and my paragraph has come to an end/ so instead of embracing life i wait for it to stop/...' (i've been to that point of my life a few times. i love this poem. you are a very talented) Lee
You are a great poet. I hope to read more of your work soon.
i agree with them. very wonderful! looking forword to reading more of your work!
Nice poem it really makes you have to think to get it I simply love that about a poem....great write. DIMPLzZ
I really enjoyed reading this beautiful poem of yours, I love the rhyming. You put it together very well. ~ Hazel G.E
'back to my stalking enemy or is he my walking friend? you see i feel like the last word in a sentence and my paragraph has come to an end'... these lines talk of imaginative poetry...beautuiful write, Keith...resembles Goethe's famous write...10
'so instead of embracing life i wait for it to stop you conclude your poems in a beautiful way here too the finale is awesome ++10 anjali
this is priceless..its like the words are alive and the emotion is actually coming out at you..applause
This is very meaningful and deep, just believe in what you think is right. Thank you. Love, Kat sorrow
The ending is just amazing... reminds me of something i wrote a long while ago. there not really anything alike at all... You have a unique way of bringing all your feelings to life and i love it! When I read your poems I could just sit back, close my eyes and picture whats going on... almost like you were saying this aloud to me. Amazing just beautiful!
You amaze me everytime with your poems this one i love bc it shows who you really are and keith your life is a blessing bc you have showed me how to live life with no regrets. hadyn