Wednesday, December 31, 2008

Waiting For A Friend Comments

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tired and hungry the beast still hunts me
he stalks in the shadows as life grows shallow
waiting for the days to get shorter so he can begin his slaughter
with hatred in his eye but his job on his mind
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keith hendrickson
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Hadyn Rodriguez 18 December 2010

You amaze me everytime with your poems this one i love bc it shows who you really are and keith your life is a blessing bc you have showed me how to live life with no regrets. hadyn

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Ciara Gough 23 October 2009

This is a great poem I felt like I was there

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Leeona (XOXOs) Sugakixs 19 September 2009

'you see i feel like the last word in a sentence and my paragraph has come to an end/ so instead of embracing life i wait for it to stop/...' (i've been to that point of my life a few times. i love this poem. you are a very talented) Lee

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Kaily Raven 19 September 2009

you are a alsome poem wrighter love your poems

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Kjxnhvkzdh Vnhcjfh 15 September 2009

wow you a really good poet keep it up

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Natasha Dowdy 10 September 2009

You are a great poet. I hope to read more of your work soon.

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Crystle Jones 08 July 2009

i agree with them. very wonderful! looking forword to reading more of your work!

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Heather Hill 30 June 2009

I agree with LeChelle there it does make u think to get it....

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Nice poem it really makes you have to think to get it I simply love that about a poem....great write. DIMPLzZ

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Evaughn Gray 16 June 2009

I really enjoyed reading this beautiful poem of yours, I love the rhyming. You put it together very well. ~ Hazel G.E

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Kesav Easwaran 30 January 2009

'back to my stalking enemy or is he my walking friend? you see i feel like the last word in a sentence and my paragraph has come to an end'... these lines talk of imaginative poetry...beautuiful write, Keith...resembles Goethe's famous write...10

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Anjali Sinha 21 January 2009

'so instead of embracing life i wait for it to stop you conclude your poems in a beautiful way here too the finale is awesome ++10 anjali

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Autum Skiles 19 January 2009

this is priceless..its like the words are alive and the emotion is actually coming out at you..applause

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Kat , sorrow 19 January 2009

This is very meaningful and deep, just believe in what you think is right. Thank you. Love, Kat sorrow

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Dolan Doran 17 January 2009

i like it..deep. it's nice

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Octavia Wilson 15 January 2009

The end of this poem is awesome

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Latisha Valencia 13 January 2009

This is a really nice poem.

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Kjxnhvkzdh Vnhcjfh 13 January 2009

AWW CAN I BE YOUR FRIEND?

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Nikia Chesney 12 January 2009

I have to agree. Very well written, and I love the ending.

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Beautifully Unknown 12 January 2009

The ending is just amazing... reminds me of something i wrote a long while ago. there not really anything alike at all... You have a unique way of bringing all your feelings to life and i love it! When I read your poems I could just sit back, close my eyes and picture whats going on... almost like you were saying this aloud to me. Amazing just beautiful!

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