Thursday, May 3, 2007
Waiting For A Footstep Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Waiting for a footstep that will never come,
we sit immobile round the holiest of holies,
distracted by our mindgames with a zero sum,
and though we do not have a ball, we act like goalies,
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Michael Fischer
03 May 2007
Wow...that was pretty cool. I like the whole goalie/former player analogy. Nice touch. Top marks from me! -Michael
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7/24/2025 3:57:42 AM # 1.0.0
An enjoyable write; thanks again for the background explanation. You may want to include a brief description of a 'zero sum game' - not everyone has a math degree like me. -Joe *<|: -D