Thursday, May 3, 2007

Waiting For A Footstep Comments

Rating: 5.0

Waiting for a footstep that will never come,
we sit immobile round the holiest of holies,
distracted by our mindgames with a zero sum,
and though we do not have a ball, we act like goalies,
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gershon hepner
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Joe Breunig 03 May 2007

An enjoyable write; thanks again for the background explanation. You may want to include a brief description of a 'zero sum game' - not everyone has a math degree like me. -Joe *<|: -D

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Michael Fischer 03 May 2007

Wow...that was pretty cool. I like the whole goalie/former player analogy. Nice touch. Top marks from me! -Michael

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