Sunday, October 14, 2018

Waiting Call Comments

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Oh Lord, you definitely carry the right,
to test my patience.
But from this painful sight,
I need an early clearance.
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Dr Antony Theodore 14 October 2018

You have gifted this life, decision will be yours only. I am paying huge tariff, things are not going jolly. waiting for you to break the wall.......... in moments of sorrow and helplessness, we pray O God come to help me and free me from all my troubles. i am caged....... beautiful prayer. it touched me dear poetess.. tony

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Abhipsa Panda 14 October 2018

Thank you so much Sir for giving time to read my poem and commenting on that

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2018

I trust you dear lord, intentions of yours never rude. I am that cage bird, where master is always shrewd......nice poetic expression with a nice theme. Touching and impressive too. We are like the cage birds. We act as per the wish of God. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.10

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Abhipsa Panda 14 October 2018

Thank you so much Sir for giving your time and appreciation

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