Waiting And Hoping Comments

This poem is good, it has an easy to understand diction but you really need to work on metre and rhyming scheme. Great one, God bless your head! You can go through some of my poems too, clicking on my name and it'll show you my page. Thanks!

You show true emotion in your poems. Great poetry.

That seems definitely from the heart. May you find peace through your works. They are good, still I see them gettin better.

great sara i really like keep writing

Sounds like this guy really screwed up. I hope you don't stop writing. This poem is really good.