Saturday, August 30, 2008

Waiting And Endurance Comments

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I think of you when the sun is out,
I think of you when the sun is right above.
I think of you when the sun is sitting on the horizon,
I pray for your safety and well being.
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Katherine Ng Li Hoon
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Antonio Liao 19 December 2008

when your heart is in the mode of loving this poem, birth the perseverance of waiting.... i like your poem as you put it in your heart.... thank you...God bless this poem....very nice and beautiful indeed...

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Dr.subhendu Kar 06 September 2008

yet the resonance of love by the remniscence depicting all blue when cohered from within, ...........the scarlet red resounds by the dream, the desire when waits at the door step eyes still meander into the tipsy roads, ingeniously luscious green, wellpenned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Kholekile Monakali 02 September 2008

faith is to believe in what you do not see and results is to get and see what you believed in, patience and endurence are the keys to success.... what a prodigy poem.

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Stacey Watts 01 September 2008

Very beautiful your writing is wonderful.

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