Saturday, May 29, 2021

Waiting A Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

I didn't know what it was?
But beets of my heart suddenly increased!
I didn't know how it happened?
But the unexplained restlessness quickly decreased!
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Akhtar Jawad
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bri edwards 13 June 2021

So, my friend, you have 'beets' of your heart! Do you also have 'cabbages' of you mind? ? ? ? ha ha. bri ;)

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bri edwards 13 June 2021

So, Akhtar, Re your PH bio: Are you finally a 'master of allure ** '? ? [ Allure (noun) : 'power of attraction or fascination: CHARM' ] Of course you are. bri ;)

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M Asim Nehal 30 May 2021

Top stars All 5.

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M Asim Nehal 30 May 2021

Ya we all are desperately waiting for the tough time to pass and good times to reappear. Inspiring poem.

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Varsha M 29 May 2021

Yes sir waiting has its own benefits. It's worthy to have wait than loose in haste. Good poetry sir. And beautiful image.

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