Friday, December 15, 2006

Waiting Comments

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I’ll keep staring at the perfect picture of us,
but standing in the reflection is only a memory.
Just run away with my heart and never come back.
Just know that I’ll still be waiting for this to work.
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Nathan Kraft 30 November 2009

Amazing work. You seem to have found all the desperation in waiting for someone in the way they did. I recently went through a bought of this, and you have made an impact in my life by writing this poem. good work.

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Lipstick Casanova 22 December 2006

Someone that walks away with your heart, and tells you that it's too late, isn't worth your time or your tears, not to mention your feet so firmly planted against the earth. Chin up and open your eyes, you're right this person is not worth it and probably never was. -L.C.

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