Waiting Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Waiting



I am waiting
For you to shed
The skin that covers
Your heart
Like thick curtains
I am waiting
For you to remove
The layers one by one
Till you are You
A heart in love
But unafraid of loving.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 18 March 2023

So beautiful. Your style of expression is so touching. Loved it.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 March 2023

A magnificent poem! I quote your expression, 'Like thick curtains I am waiting for you to remove the layers one by one'...wonderful. Beautifully penned! To my favorites! !

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Anjandev Roy 19 March 2023

But unafraid of loving...... fantastic....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 19 March 2023

Excellent poem with brilliant beginning Bravo! ! !

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Sandra Feldman 19 March 2023

Very clear message poetically and diplomatically said.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 18 March 2023

Lovely thoughts on overcoming the fear of opening one's heart. Nicely written.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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