Waiting Comments

Please come back soon papa! ! Please hold me in your lap; I want to play with you, I want to see you, longing and waiting.. beautifully presented in simple verses full of emotions. tony

Birth of life! ! Birth of a baby girl; In the arms of her mother. Grown up today! ! Seeking for her father. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

do kindly read my bestest poem MOMS SMILES YOU WILL LIKE Thanks miss poetess you have poetic essence and acumen

I have devoted all my life composing poetry warning girls just don't believe in him and as you, (ONE) do give in he will enjoy and run then you will be sadly spun with his young one and he may also say pop who? ? ? how would i know you were the first one for me or one of the many so warn all girls but to listen me are hardly any

Feelings are nicely captured in the poem.

It's tells a story about a lonely mother and a women left by her loved one in somewhere who longs to see her loved ones (her husband) .In the meanwhile she gave birth to a beautiful baby girl.The babygirl wants to be with her father and play with him.0

a great write! an emotional write!

Write comment. A good start, Archita. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks