Wednesday, June 21, 2017

Waiting Comments

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Waiting… waiting…
People passing…
Odours wafting...
Fading… fading…
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Kevin Patrick 21 June 2017

The ever present hand of time is felt on all things, great use of the format, it feels like what a heart attack would be like, the pounding of mortality is knocking fast. Great work!

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