Wednesday, February 17, 2016

Waiting Comments

Rating: 4.8

Days turned to night
& the calendar changed
Waiting for the right thing
When time looked strange.
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Ryson Dsouza
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Part 2. When you say we wait, I think, so does every creation in the universe. A seed fall on the earth (or carefully sown by the farmer) wait for the rains to sprout…. Wonderful poem. Top score.

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Loved this poem "Waiting". All of us, human beings, wait for better days. Because we dream and we work towards making the dreams reality. We wait, but we work through the period of waiting too

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Krishna Rathi 28 July 2018

Plz provide audio of this poem if possible today because I have to recite this poem in my school

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Ryson Dsouza 18 February 2019

Thanks a lot.. Keep reading.Its means alot

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 March 2017

Waiting for something Maybe for blessing May be in destiny Learning something. Yes, it's underlined.... Beautiful write. Loved reading it.

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Elena Sandu 14 February 2017

Waiting is not just hope Its patience, faith and devote. Truth shared with wisdom, thank you!

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Life starts with waiting, everyday, every minute, every second, human needs to wait for something. Nice to read or sing.10

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Ryson Dsouza 01 February 2017

Thank you

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Rebecca Springsteen 01 March 2016

You haven't disappointed me yet, Ryson! It's just so relatable to just about every thing I can think of. Nice job...10/10. Keep on a writing! -Rebecca :)

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Ryson Dsouza 01 March 2016

Thank you for reading....All the best to you.. God Bless...

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 February 2016

Whatever you wait You will find Cause it's written in your destiny And it's underlined.. waiting in hope. waiting will bring fruits..... thank you very much. tony

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Ryson Dsouza 01 March 2016

Thank you for reading...

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vijay sahani 17 February 2016

Days turned to night & the calendar changed Waiting for the right thing When time looked strange Time is some thing that we should never ignore. And for a perfect start thing should be always done on time

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 February 2016

Farmers wait for harvest So they can feed For your lunch and dinner They are the ones to bleed Insightful and thought provoking as well as displaying social concern and awareness. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Ryson Dsouza 01 March 2016

Thank you for reading! !

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