Friday, October 31, 2014

Waiting Comments

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For a heart in love the life is a boon,
A glimpse of beloved is a glimpse of the moon,
Waiting for hours in emotional tide,
The lover when thinks to commit suicide,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Heather Wilkins 02 November 2014

sad but beautifully written how long must he wait

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Salini Nair 02 November 2014

Waiting for hours in emotional tide, The lover when thinks to commit suicide, ..........................pain of love is the greatest pain...............beautiful

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Valsa George 01 November 2014

So, at last she has come, putting an end to his mounting anxiety and doubt! Interesting poem charged with sparks of love!

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Tadasha Tripathy 01 November 2014

For a heart in love the life is a boon, A glimpse of beloved is a glimpse of the moon, Beautifully designed. I liked it very much

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Khalida Bano Ali 31 October 2014

A sweet and beautiful melody on loving waiting of a beloved.

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Neela Nath Das 31 October 2014

waiting for someone you love means taking test of your patience.A lovely poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 31 October 2014

A Beautiful poem. Very true said, waiting is like killing time. Many thoughts which comes to mind especially while waiting, is beautifully expressed in this poem. I hope everyone had waited at least once or anytime in their lifetime. It really a sweet waiting, as it tests the patience of one who is waiting. Loved reading it.

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Saheb Mohapatra 31 October 2014

love clearly means patience which is created only through a indestructible relation or faith...........a mesmerizing poem.......good use of words..................very heart-touching............THANKS

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