Waiting Comments

lovely writing. each stanza is a joy to read

very nice write........at last they meet at least in dream walking on a flowery path

The long wait for someone engrosses the mind to such an extent that she is gifted with the blessing of meeting him at least in her dream! In sleeps arms, let her amble in his sweet company for long! Enjoyed! !

a concrete poetic beauty is skilfully given to an abstract action of waiting! ! !

Smiling eyes Comforting lies Nice way to end the wait. A poem with a nice rhythmic flow.

Three stanzas of poetic splendour. Let the waiting now give way for a meeting. A good write Jasmineji.