Waiting Comments

The beginning lines of the poem are so touching. Let me cite... Waiting to see your powerful presence, Smiling, satin blue eyes that wipe's clean away any lies, Truth flowing like a river with strong currents, Of desires divine, falling, sparkling with such might From this great height, The soft touch of the breeze is you, A beautiful poem brilliantly expressed.

Feelings flow freely in the eloquently expressed exposition!

I listen to the sound of your train arriving, As i wait with tingling happiness, In our meeting point a romantic leafy lane. A beautiful poem having so many beautiful lines like above................10

So much feeling in your words. Pure emotion, presented with such honesty. Always an entertaining read. ! 8 great comments & 7 votes. Wonder why people take the trouble to comment yet can't be bothered to give you a rating.

This is certainly one of your best, and indeed one of the best in this forum.10/10. 'The soft touch of the breeze is you, The sweet song of the birds is you, when you're happy, The majestic ocean is you, determined and strong, ' What a romantic way of seeing one's love! 'I listen to the sound of your train arriving, As i wait with tingling happiness, In our meeting point a romantic leafy lane.' Simply amazing! You have given a 'tingling happiness' to all the lovers of the world with these lines!

... such a wonderful use of imagery... i love reading your poems.. teached me a lot

A nice elaboration of appreciating a simple person who always inspires you & drives out all your doubts & dirts from your mind. nice to read.

Great narration, perfect setting portray here!

Hi Hazel such beautiful words wow i am in awe of your ability to tell the story of this love well done I am delighted to hear from a fellow irish poet will be reading and enjoying more of your poems

Waiting...it's so meaningful to me...wait by the help of time will prove and show lots of things well written

A beautiful poem building a romantic aura and bringing out the charisma of an ordinary man with an extra ordinary gift! The tingling happiness is felt all through!

a beautiful poem filled with many amazing lines. great imagery

this poem is studded with many beautiful lines...very dramatic and passionate write! ! !

waiting for a friend or..... My mind of jumbled emotions, You sorting them out with your pure look of love, I like these lines very much

The soft touch of the breeze is you, The sweet song of the birds is you, when you're happy, The majestic ocean is you, determined and strong, a fabulous write and evergreen

The sweet song of the bird is you when happy, expresses sadness. Such a great write.

Beautiful poem Waiting for Some one...Loved reading it Hazel..Each lines so beautifully expressed. Loved it.

When someone is willing to fight for you, you can't get any better than that. A great poem.

This 'Waiting' will ever be remembered by you and us Hazel. The equations of traits attributed to the awaited are enviably great. A good poem again transcending the usual preceding latest...