Our love is broken
The wings of time has taken it away
To a land beyond the sun
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You must be missing Our meeting at the moonlit barn Our gossiping and kissing... come, come please and rewrite our fate.......... beautifullllll so much of feeling packed up in your words and stanzas......... thank u dear Tiku poet.
That is a very great compliment for a simple poet like me sir. My heartfelt gratitude.
Your anguish over the broken love has nicely been portrayed. Your anxiety and expectations over an amicable solution of the drift are also beautiful...10
That is true Sir. Thanks for your concern. I am glad you liked it.