Sunday, September 4, 2011

Waiting Comments

Rating: 5.0

She waited in the hallway,
She waited in the den;
Waiting and time crossed its arms
Just like she would wait for a friend.
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Patti Masterman
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Jim Troy 07 September 2011

Breath taking, and is soul stiring and powerful..... My how wonderful it all seems sort of like a Moon River dance come true... Totally absorbing... What a poet of delights and treasures Jim Troy

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Hans Vr 05 September 2011

One of these very touching masterpieces of yours. Very good.

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Romeo Della Valle 04 September 2011

I love it, Patti! Our daily struggle with time manifested in different ways through this great write! 10+++ Thanks for sharing! Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! ...

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Eric Cockrell 04 September 2011

can almost hear the clock ticking... good poem!

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