Thursday, June 3, 2010

' Waiting ' Comments

Rating: 2.9

Had you ever experienced sitting in a place
with lots of people in this space
waiting?
Patiently waiting?
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Ency Bearis
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Pari Dharawat 09 November 2011

I loved these lines, In this lobby of Emergency Room Persons who are in impending doom wonderful choice of words, and excellent writing, truely poetic with a grim face - 5 paragraphs; and a hopeful heart - last two paragraphs. Keep writing

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Rachel Butler 12 June 2010

'The significance of living' Rachel Ann Butler

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 11 June 2010

‘Its like in a stage, but not a Theater’ …its Theater [lolol] without any rehearsal...direction…live vibe vibrant…drama in real life...what didn’t escape your eyes…fine and lively poem… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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