Waiting Comments

A clever write here. Well worth the read. I think we'd all keep a locket such as this one in a very special place. And the crazier amongst us would probably lock it up in a shoe box covered with more locks and hide it under a pillow somewhere. Thank you for sharing. Quite enjoyable, and I like the form and spacing of each line. Never tried that. Well done. Keep Writing... -Rick

Very nice, thanks for the comment by the way. Although the poem was a response to a poem someone else posted that I thought was a bit ignorant. Not my best work, then again most of my stuff isn't.

So beautiful poem with proper flow..................

and I always kept the locket in a very special place liked these lines.. how dear it is for you. full of emotions in small verses. thank you for your comments on my poem. thank you again. God bless

love this poem... great writing...