Sunday, March 7, 2010

Waiting Comments

Rating: 4.0

The dusty old grandfather clock
Stands tall and proud
Sentry of the hallway
Endlessly counting time.
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Kim Davies
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Lesley Merrin 07 March 2010

I think this is one of my favourites that you have written. I love some of the words you have used such as Sentry of the Hallway and the patriach of time. It will touch people's hearts who have lost someone.

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