Friday, October 30, 2009

Waiting Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ocean is still and calm
Breeze is cool and warm
Sun is bathing in charm
I sat down gazing it long
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 03 March 2010

A fabulous nature you presented in imagery galore… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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rago rago 03 November 2009

flowing down like a pure stream your words are scintilating.......very nice presentation and crafted till end..............

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Antonio Liao 03 November 2009

like Lilies that float in the hyacinth of sweeten honey; tasteless lips touches the garrison of wonderful flowers......Lotus comes in my beautiful reality...such a lovely poem with a heart...Thank you and God bless....a 10 +++

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Marieta Maglas 02 November 2009

nice simile, well embedded into this poem between two visual metaphors, which are used to personify two elements of the nature : ''Sun glowed after its bath Water too glittered like gold Waves danced in grace'' wonderful descriptive poem about the nature, lovely to read....10++++++++

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Anju Addanki 01 November 2009

A nice poem where everyone goes through it at one point of time.

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Surya . 31 October 2009

a beautiful and touching poem.voted10 thanx surya

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Louis Rams 31 October 2009

very well done! it keeps you 'waiting' to see the ending.

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Catrina Heart 31 October 2009

Loved you ending lines here.........great piece! ! ! ! ! !

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 31 October 2009

again a wonderful poem from you. a poem painting a beautiful picture....

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Joseph Poewhit 31 October 2009

Paints a lonely picture

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Eyan Desir 31 October 2009

Indeed your trademark.. this kinds of poem Well done 10s...

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 31 October 2009

Waiting for the sunset and the morning simultaneously is an interesting phenomenon, Kranthi.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 31 October 2009

Waiting for the sunset is well narrated here.

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Janell Cressman 30 October 2009

stunning! ! ! ! ! ! ! beautiful imagry, loved it! ! ! ! ! ! (10 from me :))

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