Wednesday, February 2, 2005

Waiting Comments

Rating: 2.8

Feeling here
I am alone.
Waiting softly
For the phone;
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Sandra Osborne
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Cliff Morman 02 February 2005

I like your poem all the way down to the last line.Gees I can'nt belive the telemarketers don't call, I dont even know why I have a message machine thanks Cliff

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Lizzie Nelson 02 February 2005

So much longing and the constant repetition of waiting, waiting, waiting a perpetual reminder of it...

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Herbert Nehrlich1 02 February 2005

Cheer up Sandra and give me your phone number... H

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Theodora Onken 02 February 2005

Silence can be so deafing...and we always long for that call, that one call, from a friend, from long ago, to reasure us, that we are still loved.. Great Poem, Sandra Warm regards, Theodora Onken

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Allan James Saywell 02 February 2005

The golden silence is broken by a ring, ring, ding a ling, silence is golden With a warmth allan

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