Thursday, October 18, 2012

Waiting Comments

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My heart is waiting,
waiting for you to come to me,
my eyes will not know you,
nor will my mind
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Heather Noll
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Unwritten Soul 01 November 2012

This poem sound like a song, if you keen on music writing, it would be nice to change some part to be some bridges and chorus part...it was a good writing Heather_Soul

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Heather Noll 01 November 2012

Same with me....i went through pain....but now he is mine..hows yours?

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