Tuesday, April 14, 2009

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Rating: 4.5

The snowman is silent, without a whisper
The smile on his face o' so sinister
His legs dangle so careless and free
A branch in the wind, a fish in the sea
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Rylan Ollivier
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Debra Kemper 16 April 2009

Great images! and yes, very sad. Poor snowman! Cool! Excellent title!

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Debra Kemper 16 April 2009

Great images! and yes, very sad. Poor snowman! Cool!

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Serge Kapol 14 April 2009

'a fish in the sea' is kind of cliche. But I don't know what else would go and rhyme so *shrug* Other than that I liked it. Some nice descriptions and such. Very nice.

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Grace Guintos 14 April 2009

so sad.. i pictured out how you describe your snow man.. and i like the idea.. i remembered christmas.. but too bad.. we dont have snow here in the philippines.. take care and GOD bless..

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Rylan Ollivier

Clovis California
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