Thursday, April 9, 2009

Waiting Comments

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I sat for hours lookin’ at the street
He was still nowhere to be found
Never got a call
It never beeped
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Vanessa Kingsley
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Daryl Young 12 April 2009

Well I must say that I really enjoyed this. The flow, the meaning and the hurt and pain that this pulls. Is really good. I wait and just want to know what all happened, leaves me wanting more so its realy good. Rabbit

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James Mclain 09 April 2009

A lot here to read and no just solution than to say I enjoyed the poem to much and thank you..iip

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Vanessa Kingsley

Vanessa Kingsley

Colorado Springs, Colorado
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